Exile
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A father and daughter discover an intruder on their ranch.
Exile is a sci-fi short about a father and daughter living near the edge of a robot containment camp. One morning, they awaken to find an escaped robot has broken into their shed and stolen goods. As the father and daughter head into the woods to find the robot and bring him back to containment, the daughter soon discovers that her father has ulterior motives.
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occultku
Talk about short and sweet. This one feels like one scene of what could be a hollywood movie. Everything was top notch,from the crystal clear visuals to sound to the acting. Hopefully we see more of this story.
Talk about short and sweet. This one feels like one scene of what could be a hollywood movie. Everything was top notch,from the crystal clear visuals to sound to the acting. Hopefully we see more of this story.
Reed N
Solid production quality, but didn’t really get a good feel for the world. Obviously it’s difficult to do too much in such a short piece, but without any motivation for why the robots were exiled or why there was a wall, the dad’s anger and girl’s empathy feel sort of empty. The trope of a TV or radio news announcer talking about the robot situation in the beginning (and thus providing implicit motivations for the main characters) could have added a lot to the story arc without using much time.
Solid production quality, but didn’t really get a good feel for the world. Obviously it’s difficult to do too much in such a short piece, but without any motivation for why the robots were exiled or why there was a wall, the dad’s anger and girl’s empathy feel sort of empty. The trope of a TV or radio news announcer talking about the robot situation in the beginning (and thus providing implicit motivations for the main characters) could have added a lot to the story arc without using much time.
Joel Moots
Hope there’s more!
Hope there’s more!
Gunarso Nguyen
Yeah I want more. Hope this concept gets a kickstarter or something because this was way too short. Like a promising opening to a much larger story. Really good production and acting all around. I hate how engaging it was and then it just ends. Really want more.
Yeah I want more. Hope this concept gets a kickstarter or something because this was way too short. Like a promising opening to a much larger story. Really good production and acting all around. I hate how engaging it was and then it just ends. Really want more.
Mike Schmidt
Decent story, with an ending left to a little confusing interpretation. It appears captured bots are being transported to other side of the wall. Why? For what purpose? Why aren’t they just being put down if undesired? How come there are so many loose? Lots of questions.
Decent story, with an ending left to a little confusing interpretation. It appears captured bots are being transported to other side of the wall. Why? For what purpose? Why aren’t they just being put down if undesired? How come there are so many loose? Lots of questions.
emailrobmagwood
sad it;s only so long. wonderfully done!
sad it;s only so long. wonderfully done!