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A father and daughter discover an intruder on their ranch.

Exile is a sci-fi short about a father and daughter living near the edge of a robot containment camp. One morning, they awaken to find an escaped robot has broken into their shed and stolen goods. As the father and daughter head into the woods to find the robot and bring him back to containment, the daughter soon discovers that her father has ulterior motives.

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  1. occultku

    occultku

    Talk about short and sweet. This one feels like one scene of what could be a hollywood movie. Everything was top notch,from the crystal clear visuals to sound to the acting. Hopefully we see more of this story.

    8.0 rating

    Talk about short and sweet. This one feels like one scene of what could be a hollywood movie. Everything was top notch,from the crystal clear visuals to sound to the acting. Hopefully we see more of this story.

  2. reed.nightingale

    Reed N

    Solid production quality, but didn’t really get a good feel for the world. Obviously it’s difficult to do too much in such a short piece, but without any motivation for why the robots were exiled or why there was a wall, the dad’s anger and girl’s empathy feel sort of empty. The trope of a TV or radio news announcer talking about the robot situation in the beginning (and thus providing implicit motivations for the main characters) could have added a lot to the story arc without using much time.

    6.0 rating

    Solid production quality, but didn’t really get a good feel for the world. Obviously it’s difficult to do too much in such a short piece, but without any motivation for why the robots were exiled or why there was a wall, the dad’s anger and girl’s empathy feel sort of empty. The trope of a TV or radio news announcer talking about the robot situation in the beginning (and thus providing implicit motivations for the main characters) could have added a lot to the story arc without using much time.

  3. jammoots

    Joel Moots

    Hope there’s more!

    10.0 rating

    Hope there’s more!